No Love Lost - thoughts appreciated

Hey, just finished this song. Please let me know if it makes sense and flows well - and any likes/dislikes.

Thanks

Ems

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Untangle the limbs
Unhinge the minds
But can't unblow the fuse
You played by your rules
I played by mine
Stuck in two games both were bound to lose

We threw our stones in the glass house that we built
Still I want to hurt you, I want to hurt you.
Our tounges were tied, bound by bitterness and guilt
I want to hurt you, I want to hurt you,
I want to hurt you now

It's so odd there's nothing stranger
That we should start and end this tale as strangers
But that's all there is
No matter the cost
There's no love lost

I painted your portrait
Now hate what they see
As hindsight escapes me
I forget the troubles
The cafes, footsteps, songs
Return to haunt me.

Can we go - back the way we came
Cos I want to hate you, don't want to hate you
What's to say I - won't go down that road again
I want to hate you, don't want to hate you.
Don't want to hate you now

It's so odd there's nothing stranger
How can we start and end this tale as strangers
But that's all there is
No matter the cost
There's no love lost

Head tells heart to rue a lesson learnt
Because I miss who we were before we weren't
What to chose - when I can only lose?
'Cause I can't sleep with you and I can't sleep without you.

amazing love how you piece it together
Very relatable
Favorite line is
"we should start and end this tale as strangers"
Love love love
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