new song

i've never really let people look at my lyrics before but i do ask for complete and total honesty

Better Day

Verse 1
It's pourin and it's rainin
everybody else keeps claimin
that tomorrow's gonna be a better day

You look up at the sky
you see it's full of clouds
and find it harder and harder to see it their way

Pre-chorus
it's time to find your rainbow in sky
'cause it's all gonna be alright

Chorus
Your tomorrow's gonna be like the first spring day
when all the flowers go to blooming and cold goes away
the skies are blue and there's not a cloud for miles

You look out over the night sky and you see all of the bad times
but you know it's ok
cause you know what comes after the night
it's a better day

it has a second verse but i'm not finished with it quite yet

please be honest

They are actually pretty good. it seems to flow decently.you can't really shoot down actual lyrics themselves because it is what YOU are feeling and how you see the situation. It's actually tieing it into song. That's when it gets complicated. hope this helps or makes sense.