This is my first post so please tell me how i do. I never wrote these lyrics to anyone before. About me...

i'm 14
i am inspired by eminem - he is who made me want to write lyrics
i am from california
and... my name is Colin
please give me your god honest opinion
i never wrote and showed my lyrics to people before
these take me about 5 mins to 15 mins to make and well these are new lyrics


we'll here i am


(title) United states

as people worry about their first impression
we all know the united states is in a recession
from the stuff that bush left us
as people begin to lust
for the things that obama will bring
as united states begin to sing
and let the flag wave for the people that are free
as we sing about the country of Liberty





not much of a first impression but its only the beginning so i thought i would start off small