Song lyric review please

Never posted on here before and never shared anything to anyone i didnt know. Please let me know your thoughts, i know it uses a little too many "hes" and "hims" but other than that how does it flow?, does it make sence together? etc.

SECOND CHANCES

Verse 1. Old and alone he sits there
Searching for answers in his chair
He sighs with head and heart in his hands
Regretting decisions in some of his plans
No way to know what might have been
No way to change what you felt back then

Chorus. If life had second chances
Would we all use them?
Would we all abuse them?
If life had second chances
Rearange the dreams you had
Make rainy days not as sad
If life had second chances.

Verse 2. His heart hurts with every beat
Reliving dreams he has in his sleep
Wanting the years he wasted back
Wondering where he got off track
So many stones left unturned
So many torches left unburned

Thanks for reading

Bryar Perry 2009

I think it is very brilliant but you should add more to it so that people will review your songs more often. For example,when i first started reading it was getting good but then it was all over.Otherwise,i loved it!!!!

Thank you very much for the reply. Much appreciated

I really like this. I'd like to see more. Nice job.

Actually, it's nice to see someone who uses conventional old rhyming patterns and cadence as I do. I've never got my head around more organic verse

hiyya yea i really loved it except it ended way too quikly! i would like to hear more! you are a great song writer! keep goin! gr8 job!

smileygal xoxo