The Still-life (comment please!!)

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  1. SarahMostul said:

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    During the night is when I write about you

    It is then that I can see through your eyes
    You look upon the world as if no one else is there
    We are nothing to you but empty ossuaries, lying in the shadows
    Our slow, steady breathing gives you peace, but otherwise look away

    In silence is how I like to think about you

    And it feels just like your presence because you never let me see your soul
    I've sang with a mime
    And danced with a marionette
    And still you remain more lifeless than these

    In a dream is where I wait for you

    It is the only place I can touch your face and feel warmth underneath
    I imagine how your voice might sound, lovely and deep
    And for a second there is something else behind your hollow stare
    But that is only in a dream

    Hidden in my thoughts is where I keep you

    You come no closer to my heart than I to yours
    Keeping you locked in my mind, I am safe
    I feel nothing, as do you
    But I am not far away

    At the horizon is where I will find you

    You wait for the sun to transform you
    So you can show me what lies inside
    To finally be real and breathe on me
    But we know it won't come
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    genisha said:

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    Hi,i really love your poem/song i think you put alot of work to it
    You should also read my blue skies song


    IT WAS VERY INTERESTING
  3. Ahilla said:

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    beutiful peom/song thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanx