What if voodoo ( First lyrical try, opinions?)

I’ve been here and there
Now I’m sitting down with a devil
Johnson was here maybe Hendrix to

I sense a hound in the shadows
I feel like I’m already cursed
But I can’t find no crossroads that will work

Oh I don’t know if I dare
And I don’t know if I should
But I can feel these blues all a calling me

But I might like to trade it all in
A short life of fame
Just to spend one more day with her

Say I do make a deal
Will I make it past 27
I don’t want “what if” to rule my eternity

trying to do blues by the way

That lyrical sounds great , see it shows a desire and a will and you feel the power to get on that blues... you may work it out a little more for some touch but i cant say how ... may listen to some blues see what would match but all in all this song could be great if theres some blues riff ! so see what its goin to be!

tbh honest im still looking for a guitar. i cant play yet eather so it will take time before i get to that stage. but when i can and play my own stuff i will give it a try.

thank you for your encouragement

looked up your song lyrics. really liked the last verse, i can see how that would flow.

give me a buzz if your write anything new