first song....

My first song named "The End Of Us..."


So let me tell you that this one is for you,
This is for all of the **** that you put me through,
Your blessed words now turned to cursed,
Put thy life in pain and hurt,
My life was yours as yours was mine,
But you tore that apart with your tragic lies.
Thou darkness has cast over my eyes,
And shall stay there forever as you were my star in thy sky,
But it didn’t mean a thing to you…..



You hurt me, you dazed me
You ****** me, you played me.
I gave up everything for you……
But your love for me was never true.



Three hundred and sixty five days, twelve months, one year,
Until thy day when you ripped the dreams from my heart,
A day to celebrate, but you cast a shadow over my light,
And you stole my hope of an us forever,
With them two simple words,
Its over,
Thy words were all that mattered now,
Three words taken by the demon in your heart,
Thy love gone in a moment….
Our lives damned for eternity….



You hurt me, you dazed me
You ****** me, you played me.
I gave up everything for you……
But your love for me was never true.



You’ve left me to suffer,
Not any words of regret or apologies,
Only your meaningless cry for forgiveness,
Thy emptiness is now creeping over my motionless body.
As I lay unable to feel anymore…
Because part of me is gone as I once knew..
that’s why its worthless to live anymore….
My dreams shattered, my love lost..
The end of my life, my hope, my dreams,
My love, this is the end of us…

WOW,that's all i can say is wow.I can't believe you wrote this.If you are a kid then you are on your way to the top.

Originally Posted by genisha

WOW,that's all i can say is wow.I can't believe you wrote this.If you are a kid then you are on your way to the top.

uhm, i wasn't really expecting that to be honest, i was expecting, that's quite terrible, you should quit now...and i am 16 to answer your question.

but thank you ! a lot.