Clown's Lull

So, I'm new to this; hopefully I'm not too awful, hopefully I'm not too good. Any feedback would be much appreciated!
Thank you, Alex




Clown's Lull

Hold my hand, hold it tight
Let’s rob this black carnival
Conquer fears, make it right
I’ll protect your fading
Your tattered your torn

Bleeding chalk outlines
Full of intent full of fun
Until he walked
We watched him trip into oblivion*

Just break these*lullabies
Let me dance upon these frozen rivers
Pierce my eyes with hammer and nail
We’ll reach the same place one day
Soon wont be short enough
f**k this limp*fairy tale*

Hold my hand, hold it tight
Let’s rape this black carnival*
No one’s got to know
I’ll protect your fading
Your tattered your torn

Just break these*lullabies!
And let me dance upon these frozen rivers!
Pierce my eyes with hammer and nail*
We’ll reach the same place one day
Soon wont be short enough
To walk this limp*fairy tale*

Turn these dusty pages
Dive deeper through the fable
Find the answer mid-way through
Not a smile on a face
Just let it be
Echo through time

And shut the door
And Let’s sit and smile
Just for now..
Just for a while
Painkillers, windows and pedophiles

Time-stopped
Sweaty hot
Bloom...

Just break these*lullabies!
And let me dance upon these broken rivers!
Pierce it all from fall to fall
We’ll reach the same place one day
Soon wont be short enough
To walk this limp*fairy tale*