This is my first thing i've wrote in a while, i'm not to good with words and putting them together but i thought i'd try to write something tonight.
I love songs that sound upbeat but when u here the lyrics there really dark, so i tried to do that. So while i was sitting here having a drink i came up with this. Tell me what ya like or if u dont like it, feel free to crit me however you like, I will do the same if ya leave me a link to your work. Try to think of it with upbeat acoustic guitar chords played along with it.here it is
I'm pouring another drink tonight
I'm pouring another drink tonight
To take one last sip before i die
To watch the light fill my eyes
I'm pouring one last drink tonight
I'm sharpening all my knives tonight
I'm sharpening all my knives tonight
To make the cut far and wide
To pour out all the battered lies
I'm sharpening all my knives tonight
I've gone and lost my way alright
I've gone and lost my way alright
Could someone take me by the hand
And try to make me understand
How I've gone and lost my way tonight
I'm laying here thinking is there a light
I'm laying here thinking if there was a light
Please save us from this damned life
Then let us suffer through hell and strife
I'm laying here thinking where is the light.
I can not keep from crying tonight
I can not keep from crying tonight
Before I lived and now I die
For all I know I am a lie
I can not keep from drowning tonight