Confused

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  1. genisha's Avatar

    genisha said:

    Smile Confused

    Hi,this is my first poem i am writing for this site but i do have some songs on lyrics review that you can review also.

    Look at you
    Standing in my direction
    I thought me and you
    Had the same reflection
    But you
    Tried to lead me to dissatisfaction
    Why did you
    Leave me alone in portions

    I don't like being used.
    I am just so confused

    Theres more to it,but i don't know if it is good or not.So,please comment and tell me f i should add some more to it.I shouldn't bother adding more if it is boring.
    Last edited by genisha; 01-15-2010 at 03:51 PM.
  2. Paris13's Avatar

    Paris13 said:

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    I like it little sister.
  3. LaylaFelix's Avatar

    LaylaFelix said:

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    It's real. Never let anyone tell you otherwise.