Just a blonde

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  1. microkid said:

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    This is a song I wrote for my band. What do you think. I'm not that good in English, so if you have any comments, or things I should change, please tell me. I like comments

    "Vers - 1:"
    There's a girl I can't stop think about
    Lives outside of town in a small, grey house
    Just know that guys will get those jealous looks
    if I take her out to the dance at Brooks

    "Ref:"
    She's a blonde, but now she's gone
    took her car for a ride, drove out of town
    Well she is gone, but not for long
    she will always be around

    "Vers - 2:"
    All the guys in her presence fall down
    their eyes all glaire at her beauty
    I know I have to make my move
    so that's why I wrote this song

    "Something ... - 1:"
    When you think your on top
    She breaks it down by breaking up
    You live alone, and the blonde goes on
    living her life

    "Ref:"
    She's a blonde, but now she's gone
    took her car for a ride, drove out of town
    Well she is gone, but not for long
    she will always be around

    "Verse - 3:"
    Blondes aren't always dumb *** barbies
    this girl got style and class
    She hasn't got long in her life
    but I know that one day she'll be my wife

    "Bridge":
    And one day in the future
    maybe I'll even ask her out
    I'm shy as hell, but you can't tell
    If it's turning out well
     
  2. mstroud said:

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    good rhyming i cant rhyme like you can maybe you can give me some tips on my song "the key" just wrote it so if you can i need as much help i can get just starting nice song it was awesome