This is a song I wrote for my band. What do you think. I'm not that good in English, so if you have any comments, or things I should change, please tell me. I like comments
"Vers - 1:"
There's a girl I can't stop think about
Lives outside of town in a small, grey house
Just know that guys will get those jealous looks
if I take her out to the dance at Brooks
"Ref:"
She's a blonde, but now she's gone
took her car for a ride, drove out of town
Well she is gone, but not for long
she will always be around
"Vers - 2:"
All the guys in her presence fall down
their eyes all glaire at her beauty
I know I have to make my move
so that's why I wrote this song
"Something ... - 1:"
When you think your on top
She breaks it down by breaking up
You live alone, and the blonde goes on
living her life
"Ref:"
She's a blonde, but now she's gone
took her car for a ride, drove out of town
Well she is gone, but not for long
she will always be around
"Verse - 3:"
Blondes aren't always dumb *** barbies
this girl got style and class
She hasn't got long in her life
but I know that one day she'll be my wife
"Bridge":
And one day in the future
maybe I'll even ask her out
I'm shy as hell, but you can't tell
If it's turning out well
good rhyming i cant rhyme like you can maybe you can give me some tips on my song "the key" just wrote it so if you can i need as much help i can get just starting nice song it was awesome