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Hi everybody, this is my first post on this forum so if it seems like i don't know what i'm doing i probably don't. So anyway i'm 16 and very unseasoned song writer but i have been told by several people that i am talented in this field. So if you could politely critic this i would be thrilled and if you could give me a title also much appreciated.

Your eyes are what
Rise me from my sleepless nights
Show me who I am
And ignites the fire of my soul

This year, this long year
When I forgot your face
When your name was at the back of my mind

Seeing you now
Reminds of a taste
Of who I could be

Love is the seed of romance
Love is the point of life
Love begins every dance

Love is the poison in the vain
Love is all the tears we cry on the inside
Love is my pain

And if this is
What I must go through
So that I can love you
Then I will see it through

When I saw your face again
The thoughts of you returned
To my eyes

It was then
I realized
I made
The worst mistake
A man could
I said no

Love is the seed of romance
Love is the point of life
Love begins every dance

Love is the poison in the vain
Love is all the tears we cry on the inside
Love is my pain

Love is what makes me sing these words
Love is what controls my dreams
Live is what controls my breath

If my soul must be damned
Or my life must be ended
So that I can love you
Then I will see it throug

hiyya! pretty good song! when you said ' when i saw your face again the thoughts of you returned ' i dont think you need 'to my eyes' as for the title it could be somethin like love is everything. otherwise gr8 song!
keep goin! writin lyrics is not about being good at it, its about putting your feelings and thoughts onto paper and making those words into something anyone would listen to! so don't give up and have fun! gr8 lyrics tho!

xoxo smileygal