Please comment i wrote this song for the girl and need your opinion

Hey everybody, i was hoping you all could tell me what you think of this song i wrote for the girl i like. Thanks =)

Leap of Faith

It’s time to be what you say
When it’s time to play
The games we play

When we talk and flirt
And say we would never hurt
What we have

But why not
What have we to lose
We must ignore what we’ve been taught
And do what we feel
Do what we choose
Not what we’ve been told

Take my hand
And don’t let go
Follow me into the dark
We will form a band
That can’t be broken

Take my hand
And hold on tight
Were in for the ride
Of our lives

Take my hand
And don’t close your eyes
Come with me
As we take
Our leap of faith

I live to see your smile
And all the while
I can’t help but do the same
If that smile were to fade away
I hope to god
I am not to blame

Take my hand
And don’t let go
Run with me
Into the unknown
We will do what others
Have just spoken of

Take my hand
And hold on tight
3,2,1
Here we go
Lets start our show

Take my hand
And don’t close your eyes
Come with me
As we take
Our leap of faith

Fall with me
Until the end of time
Of course time will never end
As long as your by my side
You my friend
You my crush
You my love.

Take my hand
And don’t close your eyes
Come with me
As we take
Our leap of faith (repeat 3 times)

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I really like it.I love when boys write out thier feelings.