Who's me?? (comments are welcome!!)

hiyya ppl. this is a new song i wrote lately!! comments or any sugestions are open!!

(verse 1)
You tell me you love me
You tell me you're all mine
You tell me us is forever and always
You tell me you'll wanna marry me one day
But who is me??

(chorus)
IS me that girl you hang out with?
Is me that girl at macca's you always wanna be with?
Is me your best friend's girlfriend?
Or is me,
Me?

(Verse 2)
You tell me you wanna hang out
But you always bail on me
Making excuses that i know aren't true
Because we both know you are lying
You are hanging out with one of those other girls

(chorus)
IS me that girl you hang out with?
Is me that girl at macca's you always wanna be with?
Is me your best friend's girlfriend?
Or is me,
Me?

(verse 3)
So babe, it's time to choose
Who you gonna pick?
Them or me??
It's your time to pick
So who's it gonna be?

(chorus)x2
IS me that girl you hang out with?
Is me that girl at macca's you always wanna be with?
Is me your best friend's girlfriend?
Or is me,
Me?

So babe
Tell me
Who's me??

(chorus)
IS me that girl you hang out with?
Is me that girl at macca's you always wanna be with?
Is me your best friend's girlfriend?
Or is me,
Me?

I absolutely love it.i love the chorus.

thank you
you are the only one who replys to my songs
are they bad??lol
i love your abc song its really funny!!

No,they are not bad,they are wonderful.

thank you very much!!

I love the idea of this song, I really like it. I also like the chorus, and I can relate to it lol.

lol well all of my songs are from past experiances! thank you

I have to say, most of mine also come from past experiences and draw from my own feelings. lol.

haha lol! well there's something we have in common!! haha i love the scottish accent!! its aawome!!
well thanx again

And I have family in Austrailia, and I love the country.

haha thats cool! do you come here often? and where abouts in australia does your family live?
btw do you write songs or poems?
xoxo smileygal

I've never been, but I love the Outback and animals etc... My uncle and cousins live somewhere along the coast I think.. I'm not too sure.

I write emotional raps, so inbetween songs and poems.

i love the coast! koalas r really sleepy animals, mainly all they do is sleep eat sleep! they r luky! and kangaroos can really hurt!
well hav u posted any of your emotiomal rap? i would like to see some! and thanx for having my bak on the other song about the hooks

You tell me you love me
You tell me you're all mine
You tell me us is forever and always
You tell me you'll wanna marry me one day
But who is me??

This is my fave part
Keep writing, you have skills

thank you very much! it means the world to me when people say they like my lyrics! i will be posting a new song soon!
thank you again! xoxo smileygal

Originally Posted by smileygal

i love the coast! koalas r really sleepy animals, mainly all they do is sleep eat sleep! they r luky! and kangaroos can really hurt!
well hav u posted any of your emotiomal rap? i would like to see some! and thanx for having my bak on the other song about the hooks

Only one song posted, but you've seen it and posted in it.
And you're welcome!