Game over! Something i wrote

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  1. pure_poison said:

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    Game over


    ive built this wall around me
    never opend my heart 4 anyone
    then you came from heaven, you broke this wall
    and made fire go through my veins that went right through my heart

    now everything has changed
    it doesn't feel the same anymore
    were in this thing called relationship,
    but it feels like im the only one trying 2 feel this.
    Knowing i didn't gave my all 2 you, pretending being someone im not.
    well believe me im more ready to give my all to you.
    but evertime i want to, you just dissapoint me over and over.

    And this wall is building it self again.
    My longs are screeming for air, air that i called ...[name]
    I really do believe you love me, you just so not knowing how to give it to me.
    I thought you knew me why is this so hard 4 you?
    You could have learned from your mistakes.

    I miss you ( the old you )
    I miss how things were
    I miss us

    Who on earth did this to us
    i thought you were an angels
    But how can an angels make fire go through my veins
    You lil demon.

    Baby you know I love you
    But are you blind can't you see how im hurting.
    The fire you gave me first is now burning through my skin
    im tired of playing games.
    We need a break and think
    about what we really want.
    what you really want
    it's up 2 you!!
    Cause I say GAME OVER!


    I hope you like the poem i wrote
    xxKisses Poisonxx
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    Steve0 said:

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    Im more into the ryming poems, but this poem is good, it tells a story about a relationship and i like (love poems).

    Thanks it was enjoyable to read.
  3. pure_poison said:

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    thanks sweettyy!!

    its more a kinda story about how i felt
    during a relationship.
    but i like ryming poems 2
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    Steve0 said:

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    Have you read my love songs? all the songs i write about are for a girl that i love with all my heart.
  5. pure_poison said:

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    no i didn't, but i would love 2 read them
    can you tell me where 2 find them
    .Beacause im new here.
    and I don't know how 2 find everything:$
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    Steve0 said:

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    click here it will show the songs that i have written. it will show my name under the titles. http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/lyrics-review/