"Now It's All Apart" | I'm new to the site

I'm far away from everything
I feel like I can't breathe
Any longer
Oh, I used to be stronger

-Chorus-
There's nothing I want more
Than being like before
I want my life, my friends, my heart
But now it's all apart

I wish I could just be myself,
Prove I'm nobody else
But now I am
I don't know who I became

-Chorus-
There's nothing I want more
Than being like before
I want my life, my friends, my heart
But now it's all apart


I would've never left my friends
I used to understand
What's wrong with me?
What did I wish I would be?
I'm foreign, so sorry fr potential English mistakes

-Chorus-
There's nothing I want more
Than being like before
I want my life, my friends, my heart
But now it's all apart


-Bridge-
I want to change again but I don't know how to start
My heart is frozen and so is my heart

-Chorus-
But there's nothing I want more
Than being like before
I want my life, my friends, my heart
But now it's all apart

A piece of advice I would give to you is to make your verses longer.

But on a good note, I like the chorus.

That's how I'm used to work, I began when I was like 5 or something like that