new song, be gentle lol

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  1. drummerboi1122 said:

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    Verse 1
    let sit by the ocean and watch all of the waves
    i'll stop being so worried if you'll stop being so brave
    or maybe you'd prefer to take a drive in my car
    but i hope you'll take the wheel so i can count my lucky stars

    Pre chorus
    and my intention
    is your attention
    to grab a bit more than a glance
    a new perception and a brand new direction
    and make you change your stance

    Chorus
    the sun is nice but if i had to choose
    I'd rather if you'd be the moon
    A moon has faces that never lie
    and is much easier on the eyes
    and if my mind would give me permission
    i would rid myself of each superstition
    and when the dust clears, what shines through
    is that maybe all i really need is you.

    verse2
    lets lay down in the grass and breathe like its voluntary
    and we can dig a hole and watch as all our biggest fears are buried
    or maybe you'd prefer to take a ride on my boat
    and i'll force out out every word that i never ever spoke

    prechorus

    chorus

    bridge
    the simple message that i'm trying to convey
    is that i never had the courage to ask you to stay
    but im saying it now, today is that day
    and ohhh what i wouldn't dare to do
    to be able to turn over, plant a kiss and say good morning to you.

    chorus (2x)
     
  2. drummerboi1122 said:

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    any comments would be appreciated thanks
     
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    LyricsAngel said:

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    nice lyrics, love the pre-chorus and chorus
     
  4. drummerboi1122 said:

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    thanks
     
  5. runnerchick said:

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    great lyrics i like the chorus

    "lets lay down in the grass and breathe like its voluntary
    and we can dig a hole and watch as all our biggest fears are buried"- love this!
     
  6. drummerboi1122 said:

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    thats actually my favorite line too haha.