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    Leap of Faith

    It’s time to be what you say
    When it’s time to play
    The games we play

    When we talk and flirt
    And say we would never hurt
    What we have

    But why not
    What have we to lose
    We must ignore what we’ve been taught
    And do what we feel
    Do what we choose
    Not what we’ve been told

    Take my hand
    And don’t let go
    Follow me into the dark
    We will form a band
    That can’t be broken

    Take my hand
    And hold on tight
    Were in for the ride
    Of our lives

    Take my hand
    And don’t close your eyes
    Come with me
    As we take
    Our leap of faith

    I live to see your smile
    And all the while
    I can’t help but do the same
    If that smile were to fade away
    I hope to god
    I am not to blame

    Take my hand
    And don’t let go
    Run with me
    Into the unknown

    We will do what others
    Have just spoken of
    Take my hand
    And hold on tight
    3,2,1
    Here we go
    Lets start our show

    Take my hand
    And don’t close your eyes
    Come with me
    As we take
    Our leap of faith

    Fall with me
    Until the end of time
    Of course time will never end
    As long as your by my side
    You my friend
    You my crush
    You my love.

    Take my hand
    And don’t close your eyes
    Come with me
    As we take
    Our leap of faith (repeat 3 times)
     
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    Paris13 said:

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    This is really good.I love the last verse.
     
  3. ben2012 said:

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    thank you =)
     
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    Paris13 said:

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    Your welcome,are you planning on posting any more great songs?
     
  5. ben2012 said:

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    I'll send you another one of my songs if you want me to, And thanks again
     
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    Paris13 said:

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    I'll love you to,you are really good.
     
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    LyricsAngel said:

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    Post more!!