Please tell me what you think

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  1. ExtravagentUnion said:

    Default Please tell me what you think

    (Verse 1)
    I'm dying,
    Stay by me,
    I'm crying,
    Admission is free
    Tell me, I'll be okay
    Tell me, I'll see the day
    Tell me, They've found a cure
    Tell me, Your love is pure

    Every breath,
    That passes through
    I think,
    That it's my cue
    Tell me, Try to survive
    Tell me, To take it in stride
    Tell me, I'm alive
    Tell me, I haven't died

    (Chorus)
    Keep me sane,
    Keep me whole,
    Keep me breathing,
    Make sure I'm not cold!
    Please be there,
    At least I tried,
    Please take care,
    But try to stay by my side...

    (Verse 2)
    I'm trying,
    To make it though
    I'm fighting,
    Where are you?
    Tell me, It's not over
    Tell me, Time is going slower
    Tell me, To keep on hoping
    And tell me to keep my eyes open...

    I'm lying,
    Everything's fine
    I'm lying,
    Please don't cut the line
    Tell me, That your still here
    Tell me, There is no fear
    Tell me, That you love me
    And tell me I can see...

    (Chorus x 2)

    (Solo)

    (Bridge)
    Douse this fire,
    That courses through me
    Douse this fire,
    And answer my plea!
    Do what you want,
    Do what you need,
    Do anything you can,
    Don't bother helping me
    Don't lie,
    Don't try,
    Don't look at me because....

    I'm dying,
    Stay by me,
    I'm crying,
    Admission is free
    Tell me, I'll be okay
    Tell me, I'll see the day
    Tell me, They've found a cure
    Tell me, That your love is pure...
     
  2. ben2012 said:

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    It's really good
     
  3. Sewn Up's Avatar

    Sewn Up said:

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    Damn, not bad at all! The "first word repitition" is catchy as all get out and got me really curious. What exactly is this song about? I'm sorry if I get this wrong, but it kinda brings to mind a cancer patient. Am I wrong?
    Have you ever seen blood in the moonlight? It appears quite black. Have you ever seen spiders crawling on the graves?
     
  4. ExtravagentUnion said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sewn Up View Post
    Damn, not bad at all! The "first word repitition" is catchy as all get out and got me really curious. What exactly is this song about? I'm sorry if I get this wrong, but it kinda brings to mind a cancer patient. Am I wrong?
    Well earlier in January, I was really sick with a stomach flu and my girlfriend felt like she couldn't do anything for me, but in all reality just her being there made me feel so much better, ignoring my sickness. So the song juggles back and forth between her POV and mine. Thanks for the reply,

    Alex