Silent Hotels

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  1. Southlyric said: 02-05-2010 06:11 PM

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    South Lyric

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    FlamE said: 02-06-2010 04:18 AM

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    Hello there . I like your idea and how you put the lyrics there describing the hotel but from time to time , try and put some rhyming . It will sound much more better . Anyways , I like it and I think it's good for one of your first lyrics.
    -= FlamE =-

  3.  Southlyric said: 02-07-2010 05:01 AM

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    Okay..

    Thanks a lot
    South Lyric

  4.  Southlyric said: 02-11-2010 07:25 PM

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