about you (comments welcomed)

verse 1
am i correct to assume that the end is coming soon
that you'd break my bones or pop me like a ballon
i'll gather what is left and i'll leave this afternoon
so i can live to see another moon


prechorus
and each time we heard that wind whip round
each time we tried to run
we'd slowly slip into the ground
with each slip of the tongue

chorus
It's come to this I can't believe how far we slipped
and these sleeves are feeling lighter now relieved of all the their tricks
and drink after drink sinks me into the sink
and when i am through and at last i come to
i will try to remember exactly what i like about you

verse2
i've never been able to enjoy my times with you
all your words were color coded, in shades of red and blue
crimson for the warnings of the deeds that you might do
and aqua for the few times you were true

chorus
It's come to this I can't believe how far we slipped
and these sleeves are feeling lighter now relieved of all the their tricks
and drink after drink sinks me into the sink
and when i am through and at last i come to
i will try to remember exactly what i like about you

drink after drink sinks me into the sink
night after night we tried to get it right
you tightened your hold as my blood cells ran cold
and when im through and at last i come to
i'll fix my gaze on the end of this maze
and i will try to remember exactly what i liked about you

any comments would be appreciated thank you

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