That Tuesday Night

***First of all, this lyric isn't very deep, its just plain honest. Its not finished.***

You're drunk again I see, this kinda emptiness is filling me,
Who would think you would fall, but then never get up again?
Why cause more pain when you see these wounds I have,
breake more dreams than what you've ever had,
Kick me while I'm down, ignore my screams,
Keep call me stupid, just breake my dreams,

Without you, I'll be fine,
Cause with you, I would walk miles and miles before I noticed you weren't even there,
You were off to somewhere where your sins would be accepted and you weren't even noticed as the sinner that you are. And your hypocritic actions would be gossip in the street, cause we didn't even meet that tuesday night.

***Okay, the first part sucks, I know. The melody is a bit Green Day-ish but the end of it is more pop. Feedback ?***

I thought the first part was good...tho the second is definitely my favorite
I can't wait to read it finished!