Happily Infected (Progressive rock)

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  1. Sugarmagnolia420 said:

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    This is an infection
    spreading to all parts of your brain
    gathering a multimedia collection
    only way to stop it is to flush it down the drain

    The intent is to surpass and amaze
    to elate and shake off the daze
    to inspire activity collectively
    like powder in your nose
    coming through the plastic hose

    Wake your mind up it has work to do
    make it process for you
    the words coming out of my mouth
    sent as a sound wave telling you not to submit and behave

    I want to make you understand
    not everything needs to be planned
    spontaneous acts ignite opportunity
    be creative this infection has no immunity

    Let it wash over you and flow through
    From head to toes there is no need for foes
    we all have our woes
    but peace and love will prevail
    and pick you up when you fail

    The truth is very simple so why complicate
    there is no need for lies, frustration, and hate
    there really is no debate, on the tip of your tongue is
    an argument your mind is unable to create

    Are you receiving the signals I am sending
    they are a reflection of light bending
    I am not trying to sound condescending
    but the end is really another beginning

    Open your pathways of communication
    open the windows of your senses
    feel the overwhelming sensation
    tear down the netting and fences

    Don't expect it to be crystal clear
    let go of all resentment and fear
    hold my hand and travel sublime
    were going on a journey through the sands of time
  2. Essen said:

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    This reminds me of The Sound of Muzak by Porcupine Tree! You've got a lot of good material, however, I feel like the "point" is a bit absent. Maybe you should focus a bit more on what you really wan't to say, and use metaphores that will help you do just that.
    Anyway, good job!