The song i posted here was the first one i ever wrote. I've changed it dozens of times and i think this is the best i can make it. Please comment any suggestions are welcome as well.

Cruel as You

And so I sit here
surrounded by my peers
but still alone

I wonder to my self
how did reach this place
of peace and quite

It dawns on my mind
that a certain point in time
was the reason and the rhyme
when you were all that was on my mind

when you turned away
On what I thought
Was the worst day
Of my life

I thought my life was done
I thought I was at my end
I thought I lost the only fight
I had won


Boy, was I wrong (in the back round)


When I tried to talk
to find the reason why
you acted as if I died

despite all my attempts
my words didn't make dents
in your cold shoulder

I started to realize
That you were
A cold hearted *****
Who wanted nothing more
Than to break all the ties we had

They say what doesn't kill you makes you stronger
I say what doesn't kill you
doesn't care enough to finish you

and that’s all
You will ever be
Just another blackened memory
In the long
Tapestry
Of
my past


Know I am free
Thank you
For opening my eyes
To what you really are

I honestly hope
You don’t have to go through
What I did too
Because I’m not
Nearly as cruel
As you