just a few lyrics i been working on. if anyone has any ideas please comment it'd be much appreciated thanks

sometimes life is simple,
sometimes just ironic
think about your future,
than its suddenly chaotic
questioning your dreams and goals,
are they realistic?
hoping for the best,
you're being optimistic
past and present cross,
and its all simple chaos


and another:

you made me cry a time or two
was like a rollercoaster ride
together we worked it through
cause I need you by my side
my love for you seems so strong
and you make it sound so right
even though I might be wrong
please dont ever leave my sight