This is the first song I've ever written, it isn't finished yet. I'm an ameture (spelling?), so give me some feedback



Why do they put me through this
Why don’t they get off my back
What do they have against me
It really hurts
This mental attack

Why are people so cruel
They are so heartless
It’s inhumane
It’s barbaric
The way people just don’t think at all
They don’t think about me
They don’t think about anybody

[Chorus]-
This is counterinsurgency
This is anarchy
This is warfare
Telekinesis pain
This is a mental attack x2