New song. It doesn't have a title so if you can think of one go for it

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  1. ben2012 said:

    Smile New song. It doesn't have a title so if you can think of one go for it

    After all the talks on the phone
    And all the tears my ears have soaked
    And all the feelings I had to cloak
    To help a friend

    All the wounds I had to mend
    And the broken heart I had to tend
    To

    This is what you do
    To repay me
    Deny me
    And betray me

    Hands held
    But not the way I want
    Eyes touch
    So softly and innocently
    But only in my dreams

    Best friends forever
    And best friends for never
    You were so clever
    You said we would be forever

    You turned you’re back on me
    Why can’t you see
    This is all wrong

    Hands held
    But not the way I want
    Eyes touch
    So softly and innocently
    But only in my dreams

    If he ever hurts you
    I will not desert you
    You know I still love you
    And always will

    I’ll keep you alive
    If you show me the way
    Just take my hand we’re almost there
     
  2. ben2012 said:

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    Next person to comment I will be your best friend =)
     
  3. st@r said:

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    how about deserted
     
  4. ben2012 said:

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    I like that thank you =)
     
  5. ExtravagentUnion said:

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    Mending Apologies
     
  6. mitchlaut said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by ben2012 View Post
    After all the talks on the phone
    And all the tears my ears have soaked
    And all the feelings I had to cloak
    To help a friend

    All the wounds I had to mend
    And the broken heart I had to tend
    To

    This is what you do
    To repay me
    Deny me
    And betray me

    Hands held
    But not the way I want
    Eyes touch
    So softly and innocently
    But only in my dreams

    Best friends forever
    And best friends for never
    You were so clever
    You said we would be forever

    You turned you’re back on me
    Why can’t you see
    This is all wrong

    Hands held
    But not the way I want
    Eyes touch
    So softly and innocently
    But only in my dreams

    If he ever hurts you
    I will not desert you
    You know I still love you
    And always will

    I’ll keep you alive
    If you show me the way
    Just take my hand we’re almost there
    unending for title and this might be better if it was longer... i loved the song but it sounded more like a poem to me. what exactly were the lyrics?