Desire

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  1. st@r said:

    Default Desire

    it can still use a few changes so if u have any suggestions please tell.







    Oh My soul is burning to see your smile
    Its like I am dying from the inside to hear your voice
    Its my only desire to see one last time

    I remember all the moments we spent together
    I remember seeing the loneliness in your eyes
    I remember the emptiness in your heart

    Oh your my fire
    your my only desire
    it was so clear
    yet didn't realize
    till you were gone

    oh my passion for you
    will never restrain
    my love for you will
    never change

    cause its my one last
    oh its my burning desire
    to be with you one last time
     
  2. irmwales said:

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    '''Wish i could hit the bottom of the line,
    Why i didnt i try, to be,
    more than i would be.
    If i could have seen,
    I would have changed so deeply
    Its here with me
    Just pass the key,
    count to three,
    then you can come on,
    a journey with me.
    Just you an me'''
    Just a suggestion, you dont have to use any, its just to make it longer Xx Ly