Dreams Do Come True

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  1. st@r said:

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    There was a time when I started to doubt myself
    When no one believed in me

    Oh so much pain
    So much sorrow
    I just wanted to shut my eyes tight
    And wanted scream out loud

    But that was the past
    Now It’s a new day
    It’s a new beginning

    Oh now I have my eyes set on my bright future
    I know there will always be another mountain
    There will be another struggle
    It’s a battle that will never end

    But I wont stop till my last breath
    I will cherish all my memories
    and will make it through the pain
    just to achieve my dreams
    cause dreams do come true

    it didn’t matter how impossible they seemed
    it didn’t matter how hopeless they seemed
    i just kept on trying again and again

    don't know why
    didn't have any proof
    just a reason, a belief
    that dreams do come true
    oh dreams do come true

    oh I have soared through the sky
    i have broken all limitations
    crossed every bridge
    have weathered the storms
    just to reach my dreams

    oh but there was a time when i was surrounded by darkness
    when it felt like the world had stop moving
    and i started believing it was all over
    but baby you gave me one good reason
    to keep on fighting

    Oh i rose from the ashes
    i shone through the darkness
    i fought to the limit
    fought through the pain
    Just to reach my dreams
    Cause dreams
    Oh dreams do come true

    if you have any suggestions please tell
    Last edited by st@r; 03-14-2010 at 04:58 AM.
  2. startingtheend said:

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    okay def. good lyrics and good idea st@r ...but here is my suggestion. state what you are saying in one verse. and then state new things in the other verses. what i mean by this is, if you look in the verses...3 of them say something about climbing a mountain ..but never in the same way. so its like you're repeating the same idea. give a new idea introduce new imagery or metaphor into the song maybe?
    hope this helps a little..please check out my song goin' where the sun shines
  3. st@r said:

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    ok i get it and thanx for the suggestions
  4. m.simos said:

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    vote for you
    and said great
    ^^ because you are
  5. st@r said:

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    Thanx and i liked your lyrics, pure love.
  6. m.simos said:

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    thank you