Finding My Forever

If everyone here could feel my pain
then everyone here would know my problems
I wish that i could just board this train and ride the rails all day
and hang my head just outside this window
let the wind brush my heart back home
you're the only one who knows
you're the only one who knows

do you see what i see?
the stars are shining bright
do you feel what i feel?
let's kiss away the night

and fly away into the not so distant far away
can you see us there?
and break away from this simple suture
holding us here
lets change this gray into a radiant future
overcast painted blue and gold
you're the only one who knows
you're the only one so

take my hand
see my future
let's fall in love
and never falter
cut the lights
let's lay in silence
and listen to our hearts beat out a song
be my forever

do you remember what it felt like staring at the moonlight
waiting for a little sunshine
and with every step you're treading on a memory
from some other time
i don't care if the world can see
i just want things you and me
we can make this dream complete
come on come on and follow me

take my hand
see my future
let's fall in love
and never falter
cut the lights
let's lay in silence
and listen to our hearts beat out a song
be my forever

if i ever could make things better
i'd spend my forever with you
i found my reason and i believe in
forever together is true

take my hand
see my future
let's fall in love
and never falter
cut the lights
let's lay in silence
and listen to our hearts beat out a song
be my forever

(copyright 2010 acoustik musik ltd. )
this is one of my most recent pieces of work. it is finished with music and vocal...please tell me what you think!

PLEASE comment on this and let me know what you think

i don't know what suture means but i liked it and can u send me the link

thanks st@r..and actually the song has not been recorded yet but i will send you a link to hear some of my other music if you would like. suture is like a stitch holding something together..
im glad you liked it!

Thanks for sending me the link and can u comment on my song dreams do come true

I'd like to hear some music of yours too.
I really liked it.
I'd love to hear it put to music.

thanks springy i appreciate that