Her. <3

Thread: Her. <3

Tags: first song, love, original, travel
  1. SpringyTrampo-Lines said:

    Smile Her. <3

    Hello all in this tiny, tiny world! How is everyone doing today? I hope you are fabulous
    Just recently--Valentine's to be exact--I fell in love with a long time friend. It was at a MoonHoney concert. They are a band very similar to the White Stripes with some Latin influnece--check their MySpace. Anyways, I called her up, as she lives 3 hours away, and told her everything. I just spilled. Told her how I've loved her since I met her and how it got more and more intimate the longer I knew her. Anyways, I'm rambling.

    I've written her many songs but this is for sure my favorite so far.




    "We'll get a boat,
    Sail the open waves.
    I'm with you.
    Everything is okay.
    I love you so,
    can we go,
    Sailing?


    Let's grow some wings.
    Float through the clouds.
    We're in luck,
    we've got all the world's time now.
    I love you so,
    Babe, let's go,
    flying.


    Put on your skates
    and roll with me.
    When I'm with you,
    I am so happy.
    I love you so.
    Will you roll,
    with me?



    Let's buy a tramp-
    -O-line.
    We can bounce
    'til 2016.
    I love you so.
    Now let's go
    jumping.


    Now to conclude
    Tess's song,
    I've loved you
    for so very long.
    You and me,
    we will be...

    Married........


    Tell me what you think
    I love you guys.
     
  2. startingtheend said:

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    haha aww thats effin cute. i didnt like the trampoline part but i like the rest of it check out the 2 songs i have up and lemme know whatcha think!
     
  3. SpringyTrampo-Lines said:

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    I like yours!
    Any suggestions for the trampoline part. Is it the verse or the thought of a trampoline? I agree, it doesn't go with the rest but, I was desperate.
    Do you think it'd be good minus that verse and only have 4?
    Thanks!
     
  4. st@r said:

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    hey nice song and you can use something like "lets get lost in each others eyes or somethin like that or you can just remove it.
     
  5. startingtheend said:

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    lets dream of trips
    to outer space
    we'll walk the moon
    and see his face
    i love you so,
    can we go,
    dreaming?

    what about that?
     
  6. st@r said:

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    How about this

    Come with me
    and we will fly through the sky
    cause when u and i are together
    there is nothing we can't do
    so will u come
     
  7. yarichula said:

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    I like this one!
     
  8. SpringyTrampo-Lines said:

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    I LOVE IT startingtheend!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!
    Permission to steal?
    THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    With the music it's put to, I may a change it a bit.

    Let's fall asleep,
    dream of trips to space...
    (Keep the rest)


    Sorry, don't mean to be contradictory just, I don't want to completely steal it. Haha
    Thanks again man!
     
  9. startingtheend said:

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    haha no problem springy thats what im here for man. im good at lyrics lol. at least i try to be. glad you liked it. and yes permission to steal