Could someone review and correct my translations, please?
IRIS - nu ma uita
Ca sa nu ma uiti ai noptile de argint
O sa ninga in parul tau iarna sufletului meu
Ca sa nu ma uiti eu ti-am lasat un vis
Din amintirea zilelor cand ajungeam pana la nori.
IRIS - don't forget me
So that You wouldn’t forget me You have silver nights
It will snow on Your hair winter of my soul
So that You wouldn’t forget me I've left You a dream
From the memory of the days when we used to reach clouds
Prerefren:
Daca anii se vor risipi in viata mea
Lasand in urma doar privirea ta
O Doamne, cat as vrea ca sa te regasesc
Mereu vei fi a mea.
If years will pass in my life
Leaving behind only your look
Oh God, how I would like to find You again
For You to be always mine
Refren:
Nu ma uita, poate ca doare
Speranta incet se pierde in urma ta.
Nu ma uita, da, poate ca doare
Astepta in noapte doar iubirea mea.
Astepta in noapte doar iubirea mea...
Don’t forget me, it may hurt
Hope is slowly lost behind You
Don’t forget me, yes, it may hurt
Just wait in the night, my love
Just wait in the night, my love
II:
Cand verile ma dor iti las un rand de flori
Sa-mi amintesca ochii tai
Sa-mi te-aduca, poate vreï.
When summers I miss I leave You a row of flowers
So that Your eyes would remember me
So that they would bring You to me, when You want
IRIS - Baby
Cat am fost de singur, tu nu ai stiut
Ti-ai ferit mereu privirea, de la inceput
Anii trec, si viata merge iar
Te caut zi si noapte, te caut, dar stiu ca e-n zadar
How lonely I was, You didn’t know
…….., since the beginning
Years pass, and life goes on
I’m searching for You day and night,
I’m searching for You, but I know it’s in vain
Baby stiu acum ca mergi sa intalnesti
Un strain ce te va duce, la casa din povesti
Ce noroc, ce mare nenoroc
Ca timpul stinge totul, dar focul naste foc
Mai da-i o zi din viata ta, acelui om care-ti spunea
Baby, now I know that you’re going to meet
A stranger who will bring You to the house of a fairy-tale
What luck, what big misfortune
That time extinguishes everything, but fire causes fire
Give one more day of your life to the man, who used to tell you
Refren:
Baby, baby, baby, tu vei fi a mea
Ca un rasarit de soare, dupa noaptea grea
Baby, baby, baby, tu vei fi a mea
Tu esti unica iubire, unica iubire
Baby, baby, baby, you will be mine
Like a sunrise after a hard night
Baby, baby, baby, you will be mine
You’re the only love, only love
III:
Umbra noastra se asterne in trecut
Nimeni nu era ca noi
Cand ne-am cunoscut
Ne vom pleca pe ploi si prin apus
Ca totul este bine, iar noi vom fi doar fum
Mai da o zi din viata ta
Acelui om care-ti spunea
Our shadow…..
Nobody was like us
When I got to know you
We will leave in the rain and before the sunset
As everything is fine, but we will be only smoke
Give one more day from your life
To the man, who used to say
IV:
E toamna-n viata mea, totul este scrum
Stiam ca vei pleca dar lasa-ma sa-ti spun
It’s autumn in my life, everything is ashes
I knew that you would leave, but let me say
Refren(x3):..
Tu vei fï a mea...
You will be mine…