By My Side

This song is a little bout me but it refers to a girl that i love very much who i nearly kill myself putting my life on the line for but how it feels like now and how it used to be, plz comment and suggest and if its liked i will put more up




By My Side

I have been thinking of you
and the last that i saw your pretty face
10,00 battles have left my mind
scarred beyond recognition
and all i can think of (is you)

i have been thinking of you
and i wonder if i can have the chance to see your face
again, you got my heartbeat racin
your all that is on my mind
cause its so hard (to be here without you without you)

(chorus)
hug me when i'm here
miss me when i'm gone
have me at your side,
let me have your love by my side
and kiss me when i arrive.

day by day, more battles ensue
stresses me out and all i see
is you at my side
i hurt by day, live by night
please just treat me right.

(chorus)
hug me when i'm here
miss me when im gone
have me at your side
please just let me see that look in your eye
as you kiss me when i arrive

(solo to change tempo of song)

I wish i could change
get over my past
i wish it could be you
by my side

but all good things come to an end
as you leave
i cry myself to sleep
without her, i have nothing
but i keep on going, life progresses
hurt by day and cry by night

(chorus)
hug me when i'm here(it feels like a dream cause that you are gone)
miss me when im gone(and now im still here movin on all alone)
want me by your side(as you are all i have)
i miss that look in your eyes(as it kept me by your side)
and yoru kiss when i arrived(but you know i never felt this way before)

i miss the look in your eyes and your kiss when i arrive, but now i cry with sorrow by my side

no comments from anyone? that doesnt make me feel good

say like :

it feels like a dream cause that you are gone
and now
im still here movin on all alone
but you know
i never felt this way before

Originally Posted by m.simos

say like :

it feels like a dream cause that you are gone
and now
im still here movin on all alone
but you know
i never felt this way before

where would i put that in my song?

ok make it bridge ok
and add some words
peace say my lyric pure love and tell me

how does that look? look at the final chorus where i have an echo installed to it

you gotta make verse 1
and verse 2
and then the bridge ok

I have been thinking of you
and the last that i saw your pretty face
10,00 battles have left my mind
scarred beyond recognition
and all i can think of (is you)

i have been waiting of you
if i can have the chance to see you face
again, you got my heartbeat goin down and up
i know that i' ll never stop
cause its so hard for a girl (to be you to be you)

not bad but i did make it my own a little bit, i'm a guy hoping to write some lyrics for a girl who means alot ot me so i changed it a little bit but thank you for the suggestions, anyone else?

ok nice
you can see my new lyrics
pure love and melt in your love ok

if anyone else wants to comment guys i welcome it id like alot of different types of peoples feed back, did it suck, was it good?