What do you think?

I just wondered what you would think about these lyrics
Please give useful feedback.

The medine is in my vain
helps to take away the pain

removes the thoughts of fear
the bitterness of a tear
just seems there's never enough
some thinks its a cuff
they are ignorant and naive
luckly they eventually leave

the medicine is in my vain
and helps to take away the pain

helps me forget what i am
the only thing that can understand
not caring about all i've done
the say it is the moon but its my sun
it allows me to survive
the only thing with meaning in my life

the medicine is in my vain
and helps to take away the pain

dont ever leave or ill give up
i promise to cherish every drop
as long as it is in my blood and soul
even though it leaves a gaping hole
it will be my only friend
but i stay to the end

the medicine is in my vain
and helps to take away the pain

nice


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