Vama veche - Ana

Could someone review and correct my translation, please?

Vama veche - Ana

Demult, tare demult am iubit o mica fata
e firesc mi-a placut era frumoasa
ca o floare de zapada
demult, tare demult
ea imi daruia multa iubire
si un suflet minunat
si curat ca zapada cand se cerne
era viata mea si se numea ANA?
ce nume simplu...iar eu de-as fi stiut ce va urma
fugem din calea sa
dar am uitat ce am avut
si am ajuns indiferent
si am pierdut-o ca pe un fulg ce-n mana il pierzi cand s-a topit
cand mi-am dat seama ca am ranit
un suflet cald atata timp
si c-am pierdut-o m-am intors ingenunchiat
e prea tarziu...e prea tarziu...
voi ce acum ma ascultati
mai mediati si nu uitati
ca-n dragoste indiferenta-i ce-a mai grea
cu fiecare despartire
o stea din cer se va desprinde
iar eu voi sti ca atï facut greseala mea
greseala mea...

Long, long time ago I loved a little girl
….. I liked (she) was beautiful
Like a flower of snow
Long, long time ago
She used to give me lots of love
And a soul, beautiful
And clean like snow when it drizzles
She used to be my life, and her name was ANA?
What a simple name.. but I would know what would follow
We ran from our way
But I forgot what I had
And I ended up indifferent
And I lost her like a snowflake in hand that you lose when it’s melted
When I realized that I hurt
A soul, warm all the time
And that I lost her I returned on my knees
It’s too late.. it’s too late..
You, who’re listening to me now,
Mediate and don’t forget
That in love indifference is the hardest
With each separation
But I will know that you made my mistake,
My mistake..

here you go

Long, long time ago I loved a little girl
It's normal, i liked her she was beautiful
Like a snow flower
Long, long time ago
She used to give me a lot of love
And a beautiful soul
And clean like snow when it drizzles
She was my life, and her name was ANA?
What a simple name.. and if i had known what would follow
I would run from her way
But I forgot what I had
And I become indifferent
And I lost her like you lose a snowflake in your when it has melted
When I realized that I hurt
A soul, warm all the time
And that I lost her I returned on my knees
It’s too late.. it’s too late..
You, who’re listening to me now,
Mediate and don’t forget
That in love indifference is the hardest
With each separation
A star will deatch from the sky
]AndI will know that you made my mistake,
My mistake..

thanks a lot!

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