Hey guys Me and my girlfriend are havign a bit of a rough time. So me and my friend thought about writing her a song. Now myself im a singer/songwriter and my friend is an MC. so we are trying to combine the two styles and we was wondering what you guys think so far of what we have written down

Tips and help welcome




" My heads always in a spin,
my mind's clouded by a haze,
Life's getting worse like im trapped in a maze.
There's gotta be a way to fix what is broken ,
We have so many words but they are left unspoken,
Time to be awoken,
Wake the feelings inside,
Girl im sorry but i lied,
Girl im sorry but i'll try,
And when i see you walk away theres always tears in my eyes.

How many days do we have to stay like this
When im looking at your face i remember our last kiss,
Was like a summer breeze.
You got me needing you girl, now i'm beggin on my knees,
i ask myself how.
one moment we are fine ,
Next minute your on the phone, somehow i've crossed the line
now look at us now.. broken in two...
Food don't taste right, my heart has got the flu
So i right a lil 8 bar about needing you

And I Say My heart skips a beat,
Lil did you know girl every time we meet.
Oh girl I wish to make you mine,
It’s time I walked the line


And I Say My heart skips a beat,
Lil did you know girl every time we meet.
Oh girl I wish to make you mine,
Wont ya give me a sign. "