"Thank You" (another attempt at alternative/rock genre)

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    xclusivebmw said:

    Default "Thank You" (another attempt at alternative/rock genre)

    Verse 1:
    Sometimes I wish I could turn back the hands of time
    Back to the days when I was once happy
    And I had you to call mine.
    I long to see your smile and hear my name from your lips
    To feel the brush of your hand against my face
    Just to feel again the taste of your kiss.
    I remember how good my hand fit in your hand
    From the moment we met I knew I'd never be alone
    For beside me there you'd stand.

    Chorus:
    I want to thank you for loving me for who I am
    For coming into my life the moment you did
    And for always pushing me, helping me stand.
    I want to thank you for being who you are
    For breaking through those walls I had up
    And for showing me your love, near and far.
    For everything and through it all,
    I just want to thank you, baby
    Thank you.

    Verse 2:
    You made me laugh, smile, and showed me you care
    It sent an electric shock when you touched my body
    Butterflies appeared when you ran your fingers in my hair.
    When you laid next to me I thought I'd lose my breath
    I swore to myself that if you were in harm's way
    I'd lay down my own life to save you from death.
    Without delay I gave you a shoulder to cry on
    Just to show I would always be there for you
    And you never be alone or on your own.

    Chorus:
    I want to thank you for loving me for who I am
    For coming into my life the moment you did
    And for always pushing me, helping me stand.
    I want to thank you for being who you are
    For breaking through those walls I had up
    And for showing me your love, near and far.
    For everything and through it all,
    I just want to thank you, baby
    Thank you.

    Closing verse:
    I hate to imagine if you were gone out my life
    That I would forever risk losing your love
    Because we continue to disagree, argue and fight.
    I loved talking about the plans when we were we
    Something changed and you left me all alone
    And now I'm standing here by myself, just me.

    But I want I want to thank you for loving me for who I am
    For coming into my life the moment you did
    And for always pushing me, helping me stand.
    I want to thank you for being who you are
    For breaking through those walls I had up
    And for showing me your love, near and far.
    For everything and through it all,
    I just want to thank you, baby
    Thank you.
     
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    Yeah, now that's more like it... I've always tried to listen to such songs. Problem is; they're hard to get! The song's great acc to me. The singer's not all weepy-moany & i particularly liked the last paras (chorus) The line, 'brush of your hand against my face' makes me imagine a little kitten doing that to her master(I have cats, you know)
    I'm back!!! XD
     
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    Makes you imagine a little kitten doing that to her master, huh? Haha - well thanks. Glad I was able to enlighten that little bit of imagery for you, though. Appreciate the comment.

    And I was going for the whole thing of the singer not being weepy-moany. Good to know that I succeeded. NIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICE :-).