story without glory.....comment plz

I don’t need car money I don’t need car
All I want is peace which is right now so so far.

Tears in my eyes saying a story
I must tellya
It's not a matter of glory

If these tears r drown…… they are endless,
And if they dried inside… then I am restless.

I don’t need money I don’t need car
All I want is success
Success of me is in my country
For whom I live and for whom I wanna die
Though this destination is so high, but everyday I try.

I try n I try so so….. hard, but with every step I am bard
Bard!! Every stupid bard jus make me so damn hard
This hardness is coming in ma eyes…
Coz m crushing ma enemies and they r rushing off like flies

***** but you note it
This f**kin world is so harsh,
And i don't wanna die see everyone apart
So come with me and fight

Coz…

My brothers, my soilders, even though give their lives, but still every time they r given faulty guns and faulty flights

I ask now,how many brothers m gonna loose,
F**k these politicians my country is being ruin…..

Really patriotic. You have a desire, a dream and a wish which is proven in this poem.