It's not a dream, it's not a story

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    LyricsAngel said:

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    -Chorus-
    It's not a dream, it's not a story
    So why would I believe you when you say you're sorry?
    It's not a dream, it's not a story
    You never cared so why would you worry?
    It's not a dream, it's not a story
    Let's just let go and let the time bury

    Maybe I was wrong
    Maybe you were right
    But time made me strong
    I can get trought this fight

    -Chorus-
    It's not a dream, it's not a story
    So why would I believe you when you say you're sorry?
    It's not a dream, it's not a story
    You never cared so why would you worry?
    It's not a dream, it's not a story
    Let's just let go and let the time bury

    Maybe now we're trough
    Maybe it was fine
    I really loved you
    At the time you were mine

    -Chorus-
    It's not a dream, it's not a story
    So why would I believe you when you say you're sorry?
    It's not a dream, it's not a story
    You never cared so why would you worry?
    It's not a dream, it's not a story
    Let's just let go and let the time bury


    -Bridge-
    This is not about pride
    This is not about you
    This is not about sides
    It's about what you do

    -Chorus-
    It's not a dream, it's not a story
    So why would I believe you when you say you're sorry?
    It's not a dream, it's not a story
    You never cared so why would you worry?
    It's not a dream, it's not a story
    Let's just let go and let the time bury

    -Chorus-
    It's not a dream, it's not a story
    So why would I believe you when you say you're sorry?
    It's not a dream, it's not a story
    You never cared so why would you worry?
    It's not a dream, it's not a story
    Let's just let go and let the time bury
     
  2. m.simos said:

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    1st comment

    its great
     
  3. SpringyTrampo-Lines said:

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    Sexcellent!
     
  4. Krent_Calstro777's Avatar

    Krent_Calstro777 said:

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    Springy? Seriously? Sexcellent? XD there nothing sexual about the songs unless that a typo lol... well anyway it's a good song but need a little more phrases to be expandable.
    Damning Reficul: Song is like singing from the light whilst the emotions can be so raw from the darkness.
     
  5. Lil'ash Bbz said:

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    The chorus and the bridge is well put together, i'd love to see the verses too, make sure too keep me posted, if its really good and if it really appeals to me i'll put it on my fb page and twitter and myspace too
    Lil'ash Bbz <3
     
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    LyricsAngel said:

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    nooooooo! please tell me you didn't read this!! lol.
    I was 11 when I wrote it xD
    [Today] is the *tomorrow* you worried about ~yesterday~.Live for the ♥next day♥, not the ◘day before◘.