my lyrics pls review

ive only just startin spittin bars nd i tryed 2 write sum lyrics are they any good

If ur gunna mess with me belive me its not free messin wit me costs a fee nd thts wen I kill for it
Wen u start feelin 4 me cos ur a ***** nd u cant even punch u slap like a girl nd now im gunna shout it 2 the world nd I kill 4
Now im knockin dwn ur door show u wat im really 4 nd about u start 2 shout so I knock u out u cnt shout now nd thts wen its still war
Now ur bleedin on the floor thts wen I fuk ur girl nnd shes screamin 4 more

U BETTER SLOW DWN UR CAR I ALREADY LOST A MATE BUT NOT FROM spittin BARS IT WAS FROM FUKIN CARS ***** SLOW DWN
U THINK UR A KING WITH A CROWN BIG WHITE VAN BUT UR NOT THE KING WEN U HIT SUM1 ND U DRIVE OFF EVEN THO U COULD HAVE CALLED 999 ND HE MIGHT HAVE SURVIVED ND THTS WEN SHE SCREAMS ND I SHOUT ***** U SHOULD HAVE SLOWED DWN NOW WHOES WEARIN THE FUKIN CROWN
Now ur bleedin on the floor thts wen I fuk ur girl nnd shes screamin 4 more
OR IS IT MORE LIKE UR THE DIRRTY RASCAL COS THTS WAT IT LOOKS LIKE WEN U KEEP DRIVIN OFF
U FUKIN HIT AND RUN LITTLE ***** IM OFF

and btw people im only 13

call me matt if u want

haha cool

btw my mates r always askin me to spit in front of them but i cant overcome the nurvusness any ideas


soz bout spelling

sometimes i just walk round house just tryin 2 find good lines

do u no how old 2012 is??

cool hes well good

in the second song the line bout bleeding on floor aint supposed 2 be there i writ it in word 2010 nd it messed up wen i tryed 2 copy and paste it in

4th line in second spit is not supposed 2 be there

i think the whole thing was sloppy, no way in hell could you rap to it verbaly, its off sync, rhymes dont really rhyme and to me it was all just stupid. It would look like something you write down to get an idea to make a draft haha i wouldnt even call this a song or draft more like scrap work.