Cliché

I wrote this song one night when I couldn't sleep, and I've been working on it for about a month now, I'm so happy with it, I'd love some opinions if you please (Oh, and little game if you want, spot all the clichés xD)

(verse 1)

I know it sounds so cliché
But it's time I woke up and seized the day
I've hear they say love conquers all
and I think that i'm beginning to fall

(Chorus 1)
Head over heels, I'm in over my head
Far too deep, I got out the wrong side of the bed
but now i'm here, and I'm here to stay
I'd give an arm and a leg to spend everyday

Alone
just me and you.

(verse 2)

I know it sounds rather odd
But it's about time that I was given the nod
I've got to get the show on the road
It's better late than never just to dump my load

(chorus 2)

Then you'll see, by all means
That we're not all just crammed in like sardines
I'm here for you, I've earned my wings
And if you just believe we can do anything

To be alone
Just me and you

The birds of a feather all flock together
So seeing your smile, it's better than ever
Today, in this perfect weather.

We're soaring high, we'll sleep well tonight
as long as we keep looking on the brighter side of life
we know we're gonna be alright.

(chorus 3)
I'm head over heels, In over my head
Far too deep, I got out the wrong side of the bed
but now i'm here, and I'm here to stay
I'd give an arm and a leg to spend everyday

Alone
just me and you.

It's really good, but you might have to explain to me what you're saying. Cuz at the start you say it's time to seize he day and love conquers all, sounding like you've decided you're going to try and find love, then you say you're falling head over heels, so you've found love, but then you say you're in too deep which sounds like you want to get out of the love you found, then you say you'd give an arm and a leg to just spend everyday with that person, which is a little confusing, and then you say you;ve got to get this show on the road, but I'm not sure what you mean.

I don't mean to insult your lyrics or anything, I just thought you'd rather you got some honest feedback rather than 'It was good'

Hmm, I do see what you're saying XD

I've edited it around a little bit to make it easier to read

The first and second verses both have the same meanings, you like someone so you need to wake up, realise that, get the show on the road etc, the chorus' are really saying you might be thinking things through far too much, but now you're here you want to make it work and you wanna be with this person you're falling for.

The song itself is a cliche, it's the typical "boy likes girl, boy wants to be with girl and would do anything to be with her so boy has to act before it's gone" senario which so many songs and based around, this is just a very different angle to look at it