my first love related song(i usually hate love songs)

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  1. Superbads said:

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    I usually hated rap but i hated the mainstream rap. i found underground and old school stuff and i loved it. So i had an incident with this girl and youll see wat happened in this song. Never knew a girl could really move me the way she did.

    Verse
    Everyday you would walk her down the street
    tryin to spend a lil more time
    tryin to get that hug its mine
    she would laugh and play with the other guys
    why not me im fun and cool aint i?
    tryin to make her notice who you are
    goin to the point where ur goin to ****in far
    just please dont put me away
    why cant u just say
    hi im (the girls name) how was ur day
    sometimes you just tried to let her go
    but after the pain u just cant think the same
    always wonderin if her day was okay
    tryin to get her favorite latte
    cant go see a doctor to talk about this pain
    all you got is a pen and paper and you write away
    and u hope some day she will come ur way
    askin "hey wanna hang out this friday?"


    Chorus
    Just keep ya head up and dont look down just stay strong and ull be alrite
    cause everyone has someone out there
    just wait and see its not the end

    Verse
    All you want is a ****in hi
    but she doesnt seem to care so goodbye
    She doesnt appreciate wat i do for her
    **** it all bullshit forget her
    all hunched over and u gotta admit i dont need u in my life cause u aint ****in worth ****
    and you shake thinkin what am i doin
    this isnt me please forgive me ignore me
    and u feel like ****
    why dont i have the ****
    to **** it after all the things i did
    someday she just gonna realize she missed it big time
    she gonna come crawlin back to me sayin PETER PETER PLEASE BE MIN!!! (peter my name)

    Chorus


    Verse
    you and her had this little moment
    got this hope thinkin yeah it was all worth it
    you talk to her on the phone
    walk her home
    feelin like im the happiest kid in the world
    then she stops talkin to you
    wonderin wats happenin here
    realized i was ****in used here
    for her pleasure
    does it even ****in matter
    is it even worth it to be mad
    all im thinkin is the happiness i had
    now its all gona cause you took it away
    you ****in ***** the pain im feelin today
    now its the end for me
    im gonna be the person u made me be
    the one that doesnt fall for anybody

    Chorusx3 fade......

    so go easy on me this was the first song i wrote and im much better now
    ill post more
     
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    smileygal said:

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    i like it. good job. is it based on a tru story?? keep goin!!
    xxx smiley
    Trust, love, peace and happiness are the key to a great life!! (: (:
     
  3. Tracy-Turnblad's Avatar

    Tracy-Turnblad said:

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    Love it, I like the last line, "im gonna be the person u made me be
    the one that doesnt fall for anybody"
     
  4. Superbads said:

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    thnx for replies. I just read it through again and i see lots of changes i could make to make this song better. Ill post more of my songs.