Hey guys I'm new here, just started writing for a band again. We came up with this the other day, let me know what you think and how I can improve!

[VERSE]
It never mattered how hard we tried, you and me always fell by the wayside
If you could start a fire without a lighter, then maybe the night time would have been much brighter.
Our relationship a soaking wet flint, I think it's time for you to take a ****ing hint.


[CHORUS]
Yeah, your time is running out better run from the fall out after the call out.
If you're a quitter then baby this war has been won, cause you're staring down the barrel of a loaded gun.
Burn it all down, the city skyline.
That pretty view is yours as much as you are mine.
The flames will burn out and the pages will fold, as we turn our backs on all that we have known.

[VERSE 2]
Every days the same to me, a single broken harmony, an electric dissonance I can't deny.
Getting out of here without you my dear
Your famous lines to try and stop me here is my reply:

(This is all we've known)
Living your dream is the enemy of what were told.
(These are the lives we chose)
Wait for the day when you're gonna live your life alone.

[CHORUS]
Yeah, your time is running out-this is a call out.
If you're a quitter then baby this war has been declared won, cause you're staring down the barrel of a loaded gun.
Burn it all down, the city skyline.
That pretty view is yours as much as you are mine.
The flames will burn out and the pages will fold, as we turn our backs on all that we have known.

[BRIDGE]
This isn't love, this is me, this is everything
We are made to believe on every movie screen.
So cut the **** and all the small talk in between.
We are nothing at all unless it’s you and me.

So I'll say this once, I’ll ****ing say it twice.
If you can't sing the words then you can stay behind.
I've got the crowd, six strings, and that's all I need,
So listen one more time, then sing it back to me.

This isn't love, this is you, this is everything
You've always wanted to be without a thought of me.
I've got the crowd, six strings, and that's all I need.
This is the last time you're ever singing back to me!











Thanks guys!