Girl of my dreams ( re-written) please comment

I’ve got an idea in my head
It’s on this paper
It’s about boy and a girl
That should be together

Two young lovers
That share a heart beat
They hold each other close
And have hearts like a hero

Girl of my dreams
when I dream about you
You’re dreaming of me

Girl of my dreams
only in my head
Not in my bed

she’s got the brown hair
and the green eyes
But an arm around her
That’s not mine

I’ve seen better days
I’ve seen better times
But only when you’re at my side

Girl of my dreams
when I dream about you
You’re dreaming of me

Girl of my dreams
only in my head
not in my bed

they are two
Star-crossed lovers
That are still crossing the stars
To find each other

And even if you don’t believe me
I’ll do my best to prove to you
That what I say is true


Girl of my dreams
when I dream about you
You’re dreaming of me

Very good song, congrats

Thank ya lyricsangel =)

i like this one more than the other! great work!! (: keep going!! wanna hear more!! (:
peacee

Thank you both =]

Thanks bud

Omg, your songs are good, but when i read them, it's like i don't feel like reading it all. Maybe you should making it more interesting. Buttt there good.lol

Thanks....... I think