I wrote this on a whim from a guitarists standpoint, any criticisms will be greatly appreciated.
It's written for a minor key, not really sure how to convey a melody.
The words are a little thin, but they meant something.
And again, any criticisms no matter how harsh will be greatly appreciated.
Whisper,
To me a story
Of time's long past
Distant memories
Times that
Still feel so real
Grasp at air
Trying to feel
Intro
See,
There was this girl
There was a guy
They saw their future in each others eyes
But time grew restless
It passed them by
Left them standing in their memories
Nothing left that they could see
So time, please rewind
So time, please rewind
Back to the beginning
When memories were made
...Memories will fade
-Bridge
Everytime I see your face
Everytime I feel your touch
Evertyime I walk away
It's harder
I'ts harder
Everytime I look away
Everytime I'm falling down
Everytime I see too clearly
It's harder
It's harder
So time, please rewind
So time, please rewind
Back to the beginning
When memories were made
...Memories will fade
Solo
Minutes turn to hours
And hours turn to days
Days turn into memories
Wasted away.......
So time, please rewind
So time, please rewind
Back to the beginning
When memories were made
...Memories will fade
Outro
Whisper,
To me, and help me see
I'm holding on to
Only memories...