Rewind

I wrote this on a whim from a guitarists standpoint, any criticisms will be greatly appreciated.
It's written for a minor key, not really sure how to convey a melody.
The words are a little thin, but they meant something.
And again, any criticisms no matter how harsh will be greatly appreciated.

Whisper,
To me a story
Of time's long past
Distant memories

Times that
Still feel so real
Grasp at air
Trying to feel

Intro

See,
There was this girl
There was a guy
They saw their future in each others eyes
But time grew restless
It passed them by
Left them standing in their memories
Nothing left that they could see

So time, please rewind
So time, please rewind
Back to the beginning
When memories were made
...Memories will fade

-Bridge

Everytime I see your face
Everytime I feel your touch
Evertyime I walk away
It's harder
I'ts harder

Everytime I look away
Everytime I'm falling down
Everytime I see too clearly
It's harder
It's harder

So time, please rewind
So time, please rewind
Back to the beginning
When memories were made
...Memories will fade

Solo

Minutes turn to hours
And hours turn to days
Days turn into memories
Wasted away.......

So time, please rewind
So time, please rewind
Back to the beginning
When memories were made
...Memories will fade

Outro

Whisper,
To me, and help me see
I'm holding on to
Only memories...

well though there not much words but been spoken with emotions, and i totally cracked the melody of your lyric!!!!! It was awesome!
Ok officially i was reading it well actually singing it.... I think I'm breaking into tears because of this song!!!T_T

minutes turn into hours
hours turn into days
days turn into memories
wasted away...

thats my favourite bit!!
anyway develop those few emotions into tiny sentences tht can b instead of just lingering words...
good jobb!!! keep going!!!

Thanks! Anyone else?

anyone?

This. Is. Amazing.
Criticism? Harsh criticism? I don't think so. It's too beautiful and heartfelt for anyone to even think about changing this.

I appreciate it, thanks very much

anyone?

Very gooooood. , Biggest critique could be more :P

Thanks, criticisms are appreciated

Epic.

thanks

Anyone else?

Add some to it! So far it's great.