This is a song i just finished, please tell what wrong with it, and of cause also if theres anything great about it.
[Verse]
When I hear rain, my fire leaves
When I meet pain, it's misperceived
One more day, and i'll be sober
Whatever floats my boat, it's over!
[Chorus]
Wouldn't wanna fake it
Even if I try
Keeping it elated
Even when I'm high
[Verse]
Some have tried, and some don't care
Square the circles, make them pairs
One more day, and i'll be sober
Whatever floats my boat, it's over!
[Chorus x2]
Wouldn't wanna fake it
Even if I try
Keeping it elated
Even when I'm high
[Short Solo]
One more day, and i'll be sober
Whatever floats my boat, it's over!
[Chorus]
Wouldn't wanna fake it
Even if I try
Keeping it elated
Even when I'm high
Don't wanna try
Don't wanna try
Don't wanna try!