Megans Song

She fell*
Right of the map*
Never to tell*
Anyone where she went*

I'de kill*
To see her again*
She said she was my friend*
And would stay that to the end*
But that came sooner than I ever thought*

And I wana know*
Were she runs off too*
Were I can see her*
That kills me again*
And again*

Just tell me where you are*
And i'll find you*
Tell me what I have to do*
To just talk to you*
And I'll see it through*

She ran away*
From all she knew*
Maybe to find something new*
But I guess I'll never know *

And i miss her to death*
I wonder if she misses me too*
But I hope she's well and happy*
Where I ever she ran off too. *

Just tell me where you are*
And i'll find you*
Tell me what I have to do*
To just talk to you*
And I'll see it through. *

And if*
She comes home*
I'll be there*
I'll be there waiting*
Waiting **

This song isn't like a we should get back together song. This song is about a very dear friend of mine (Megan) that has fallen off the map. I have know idea where she is, if she's okay, if she's happy or anything. So yea this is for her god I miss her so much. Please give some feedback.

I love it! You've given me an idea for a song now!

It's a good song. But it needs more emotion, it sounds very monotone.
"She fell*
Right of the map*
Never to tell*
Anyone where she went*"

Should be more like:
"Over she fell, right off the map.
Didn't tell one where she went
I'd kill to see her again,
Deceiving me, thinking, she was my friend".

@ tracy-turnblad, thank you =) and good ha;f the point if songwritibg is to inspire others

@pricecomedy, thank you too =) ill try to work that in this was just a draft