I'm Sorry

This song is written from two persons' point of view. It's about a 'tramp' and a 'miss popularity' becoming friends and then each of them going back to the place she belongs [ that's actually a story that my friend and I are writing ] . So here it goes:

Since when is my world so empty and dark?
I can’t breathe between these four walls anymore
There ain’t enough oxygen for my heart
I used to feel good here but it’s not like before
Maybe I should’ve stayed here from the start

I never noticed how lonely I am
I have no place to run away from myself
There ain’t enough space, despite my freedom
I used to feel good outside with only myself
Maybe I should’ve always been alone

-Pre-
Now you’re back to your world and I’m back to mine
I wanted this so much
And now I just don’t understand why I’m not doing fine
Ever since we lost touch

-Chorus-
I’m sorry for running scared
I’m sorry for how I cared
I’m sorry for hurting you
I’m sorry for all I do
I’m sorry for losing your trust
But I’ll never be sorry
No I’ll never be sorry for us

I’ve always lived like this but never saw
I can’t breathe between these four walls without you
You’re the only one who got to my soul
I know that I never wanted to have this view
Maybe I shouldn’t have waited to go

I’ve always been like now but never knew
Feelings are something that people can’t control
They don’t have enough wisdom to be true
And neither do I, now that you’re forever gone
Maybe I should’ve never cared for you

-Pre-
Now you’re back to your world and I’m back to mine
I wanted this so much
And now I just don’t understand why I’m not doing fine
Ever since we lost touch

-Chorus-
I’m sorry for running scared
I’m sorry for how I cared
I’m sorry for hurting you
I’m sorry for all I do
I’m sorry for losing your trust
But I’ll never be sorry
No I’ll never be sorry for us

-Bridge-
The wall between our worlds
Is too big for me to try to crash it down
We’re just two stupid girls
Who thought a friendship could win now

Cause

-Pre-
Now you’re back to your world and I’m back to mine
I wanted this so much
And now I just don’t understand why I’m not doing fine
Ever since we lost touch

-Chorus-
I’m sorry for running scared
I’m sorry for how I cared
I’m sorry for hurting you
I’m sorry for all I do
I’m sorry for losing your trust
But I’ll never be sorry
No I’ll never be sorry for us

i loveeee the pre-chorus and bridge!!! its a good song!! gd job!!! (:
xoxoxo smileyy <3 <3

Thank you <3 <3

Your friend's story idea was amazing, don't you think? Oh, wait, that's me ! JK
Awesome, this is so much better than what I suggested for the song!

I've been meaning to post here for 2 days ...

You girls make a very good team
There's a lot of feeling in this, line for line ... and the "bitter-sweet" feeling, it's there almost from beginning to end. "I'll never be sorry for us" ... yeah ... very nice finish...

Oh and I love the flow, it moves really well.

Thanks

I liked it. It was a very creative idea and I would like to commend both of you for it.

There is a big sense of "real" while reading it. Even if you didn't give any background on it, it is not that hard to see the reality behind the song, and that it's not something someone is just trying to create without experiencing.

Unfortunately, with lyrics so personal, it is hard to criticize them very much because we, the audience, didn't experience it and can't express what you want to and in turn, cannot tell you how you should express what we don't know much about.

But that's a good thing. That's where true lyrics lie. Keep up the good work, both of you. I expect more great things from you.