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    Senior Member smileygal's Avatar
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    Cool i wish you'd care...

    i haven't written in a while and comments and feedback will be greatly appreciated!!

    (verse 1)
    Everything i do is by myself
    Every movie i see
    i see it alone
    Every game i play
    I play it solo

    (chorus)
    I wish that someone would care
    I wish you'd care
    Care for me
    Care to play with me
    Care enough to ask what's wrong
    Care enough to talk to me
    I just wish you'd care...

    (verse 2)
    I wish there was someone
    Someone to hold my hand
    Someone to hold me tight
    Someone to tell me it's all gonna be alrite
    Someone to stop me from the unthinkable
    Could you be that someone?

    (chorus)
    I wish that someone would care
    I wish you'd care
    Care for me
    Care to play with me
    Care enough to ask what's wrong
    Care enough to talk to me
    I just wish you'd care...

    (verse 3)
    Will someone ever care?
    Will anyone cry over me?
    Will someone shed one tear?
    Will you care then?
    I don't think so...

    (chorus)
    I wish that someone would care
    I wish you'd care
    Care for me
    Care to play with me
    Care enough to ask what's wrong
    Care enough to talk to me
    I just wish you'd care...

    (bridge)
    It's all too late
    The unthinkable is gonna happen
    I'm sorry
    Not that you care

    (chorus) x2
    I wish that someone would care
    I wish you'd care
    Care for me
    Care to play with me
    Care enough to ask what's wrong
    Care enough to talk to me
    I just wish you'd care...

    I wish i had you there to care
    I wish i had a normal life
    I wish i wasn't all alone
    In this sad little world

    (chorus)
    I wish that someone would care
    I wish you'd care
    Care for me
    Care to play with me
    Care enough to ask what's wrong
    Care enough to talk to me
    I just wish you'd care...

    i have three last words
    i love you...

    i wish you'd care...

    please tell me what you think!!!!!
    Trust, love, peace and happiness are the key to a great life!! (: (:

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    It's so beautiful but at the same time sad.......I know how you feel

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    i wrote it like 5 mnths ago about a guy that i really liked and to him i was a gd friend and my friends didnt care about me but lucky for me that guy is my boy friend now (: but yeahh those times r hard!! :/
    andd thanxx!! i appreciate u taking time to read it!!! im grateful!! (:
    Trust, love, peace and happiness are the key to a great life!! (: (:

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    It's good, but I think to make it amazing you could try making a new point, telling us something new. That's what i'm working on doing in my lyrics. You could add something like, You know I care, but if you don't care, why do I care? Why do I love you when you don't care? Who cares.

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    thanks tracy. good point!! thanks for the tip (:
    Trust, love, peace and happiness are the key to a great life!! (: (:

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